Freewriting [Communication] Summary & Complete Exercise, Grade - 11 NEB

Freewriting is like brainstorming. It is simply exploring your ideas through writing. When you freewrite, you write whatever comes into your mind on

Free Writing

Free writing, as described by Peter Elbow, is a spontaneous form of writing where you explore your ideas without worrying about formal structure, grammar, or mechanics. It's a short-duration exercise, typically five to ten minutes, meant to help you find your unique "voice". This voice is your source of power as a writer. By practicing free writing, you can gradually transfer the force and authenticity of your thoughts into your more formal writing.


Exercise: Grammar - Position of Adverbs

A. Study these sentences.

The bold words are adverbs. They can be placed at the beginning, in the middle, or at the end of a sentence.

  • Perhaps she is not coming to the party. (Front)

  • I sometimes visit him in the supermarket. (Middle)

  • He drove the car carefully. (End)

B. Rewrite the following sentences, placing the adverbs in the appropriate place.

  1. I often watch television.

  2. Have you ever been to Janakpur?

  3. They sometimes play football on Saturdays.

  4. The weather is always bad in November.

  5. We seldom have fish for dinner.

  6. Pritam doesn't usually get up before seven.

  7. I was very tired and I was also hungry.

  8. Did you both enjoy the flight?


C. Rewrite the following sentences, placing the underlined words in the correct position.

  1. I have never understood her.

  2. We are often invited to parties.

  3. We were all tired, so we all fell asleep.

  4. Rajan always drives to work.

  5. Pradip hardly ever watches television, but he reads newspapers a lot.

  6. We enjoyed the party very much.

  7. My brother speaks English fluently.


Ways With Words

Crossword Puzzle Answers

Here are the answers to the crossword puzzle from the text:

Down:

  • Obsessed: to be preoccupied with a single topic or emotion.

  • Creep: to move slowly and quietly in a particular direction.

  • Coherent: orderly, logical, and consistent.

Across:

  • Babble: to utter rapidly or unintelligibly.

  • Interpose: to insert something between other things.

  • Squiggle: unreadable handwriting.


Use the words in sentences of your own:

  • Massive: A massive earthquake shook the city last night.

  • Consciousness: We must raise public consciousness about environmental issues.

  • Catch-as-catch-can: The team's strategy was catch-as-catch-can, relying on improvisation to win.

  • Give up: I will not give up on my dream of becoming a writer.

  • Abandon: The family had to abandon their old house after the fire.

  • Lousy: He got a lousy review from his manager because of his poor performance.

  • Editing: After a lot of editing, the script was finally ready for the film.


Grammar: Adjectives and Adverbs

Adjectives and Adverbs Formation

Remember that adverbs often end in '-ly' (e.g., regularly from regular), but some nouns can become adjectives by adding '-y' or '-ly' (e.g., cloud to cloudy, friend to friendly).

Here's a list of words changed into adverbs or adjectives:

  • Adjectives to Adverbs:

    • careful ➡️ carefully

    • perfect ➡️ perfectly

    • automatic ➡️ automatically

    • heavy ➡️ heavily

    • certain ➡️ certainly

    • fair ➡️ fairly

    • general ➡️ generally

    • proud ➡️ proudly

    • rapid ➡️ rapidly

    • proper ➡️ properly

    • final ➡️ finally

    • common ➡️ commonly

    • beautiful ➡️ beautifully

    • frequent ➡️ frequently

    • easy ➡️ easily

    • quiet ➡️ quietly

    • loud ➡️ loudly

    • calm ➡️ calmly

  • Nouns to Adjectives:

    • rain ➡️ rainy

    • bush ➡️ bushy

    • spice ➡️ spicy

    • snow ➡️ snowy

    • blood ➡️ bloody

    • cloud ➡️ cloudy

    • bag ➡️ baggy

    • mood ➡️ moody

    • noise ➡️ noisy

    • air ➡️ airy

    • hungry ➡️ hungry (already an adjective)

    • cream ➡️ creamy

    • dust ➡️ dusty

    • ease ➡️ easy

    • ice ➡️ icy

    • oil ➡️ oily

    • fun ➡️ fun (can be a noun or adjective)

    • hand ➡️ handy

    • greed ➡️ greedy

    • health ➡️ healthy

    • hill ➡️ hilly


Fill in the gaps with the appropriate adjective or adverb:

  1. Pramila is playing quietly.

  2. Hari speaks very loudly.

  3. Mukesh is a careful driver.

  4. The test was easy and we finished in time.

  5. He is fitting the automatic door in my house.

  6. My uncle speaks perfect Chinese.

  7. It was raining very heavily.

  8. She looked very calm, but I am sure she was feeling very nervous.


Comprehension

Answer the following questions:

  1. Why is free writing also called 'automatic writing'? Free writing is called 'automatic writing' because it's a continuous process of writing that is free from rules of spelling, grammar, and formal topics. It's about letting your thoughts flow directly onto the page without conscious control.

  2. How do you differentiate writing from speaking? Writing is done through a written medium and can be edited before it's presented. Speaking is an oral medium where there's no opportunity to edit your words once they've been spoken.

  3. What are the biggest obstacles in the writing process, according to Elbow? Do you agree with him? Why? Why not? According to Elbow, the biggest obstacle is compulsive premature editing. I agree with him because this habit can stifle a writer's natural creativity and spontaneity, preventing them from fully exploring their ideas.

  4. How can free writing overcome ‘writer’s block’? Free writing can overcome 'writer's block by giving the writer the freedom to write without the pressure of perfection. It helps break the ingrained habit of editing, allowing ideas to flow more freely.

  5. What do you mean by ‘voice’ in writing? In writing, "voice" refers to the unique personality, sound, texture, and rhythm of a writer's work. It's the force that makes a reader feel connected to the writer and their ideas.

  6. Elbow uses a simile to explain that free writing “is like writing something and putting it in a bottle in the sea.” What does this mean? Explain. This simile means that free writing is a process where you release your thoughts and ideas without worrying about who will read them or how they will be received. It's an unedited, spontaneous flow of consciousness, much like a message set adrift in a bottle.


Critical Thinking On Freewriting

How does the author persuade readers in this essay? What is he trying to communicate to the readers?

In the essay "Freewriting," the author persuades readers by using various ideas, examples, and supportive opinions. He argues that free writing is the best way to improve writing skills. He advocates for the process of "non-editing," which he sees as a crucial step to enhance natural creativity. He communicates that a writer's voice—their unique sound and rhythm—is their primary source of power, and free writing is the key to unlocking that voice.


Elbow said, free writing “is an exercise in bringing together the process of producing words and putting them down on the page.” Do you agree with his statement? Why? Why not?

Yes, I agree with this statement. Free writing is an automatic process where a writer's ideas are put down spontaneously without a filter. It bridges the gap between the thought and the written word, which is essential for creative flow. By practicing free writing, a writer can overcome the fear of a blank page and the urge to constantly edit, allowing their ideas to move freely from their mind to the page.


How did you learn to write? What was particularly difficult in writing? What inspired you to write? What are some of the challenges that you still face while writing?

I learned to write through repeated practice of classwork and homework assignments. I found grammar and spelling particularly difficult at first. Written works like stories and news reports inspired me to write. The challenges I still face include:

  • Hesitation when connecting complex sentences.

  • Grammar rules still sometimes create obstacles.

  • Difficulty in quickly generating new ideas.


Writing/Freewriting

Write short notes on any one of the following topics:

My School Library

My school library is my favorite place to be. A library is a place where we can find all kinds of books and a peaceful environment to read. It's the perfect place to gain knowledge and explore new worlds. My school's library offers a wide variety of books, and I have a membership card that gives me access to all of them. It has been a huge help with my studies, providing answers to all my educational questions and making note-taking easier. The library is a sanctuary for me and has greatly supported my academic journey.

Moral Values

Moral values are principles that teach us the good aspects of life. They shape us into better human beings by guiding our attitudes and behaviors. These values, such as truthfulness, honesty, patience, and respect, are crucial for a just and harmonious society. We often learn them from our homes and communities. Among all these values, I value responsibility the most. Being responsible makes a person reliable and accountable for their duties. It's a key to living a purposeful and successful life. Escaping from our responsibilities only leads to unhappiness and failure. A responsible life is a fulfilling life.

About the author

Ramji Acharya
Kathmandu University, School of Education

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